IcyLemon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WoW: When Gnomes Fly]

Excellent Work

Excellent work, undoubtably you've gotten a fair share of reviews saying "OMG WoW sucks, I can't beleive you've done this, you used to be my favourite author" sorta reviews, I can't be arsed to check i'm just assuming :P Anyway excellent work, I hope you make more...
lol uncle Leeroy's fried chicken

[Pan the movie]

hehe

hehheh I laughed a bit
yeh could be a bit better, then again there was no real MAJOR flaws in it animation and sound wise, it was just a little short and... well there wasn't much too it was there? :P
anyway quite good :D

[WTH 1]

lol WTH?

you gotta love it...
good job! :D

Axeraider67 responds:

This movie is guarenteed to make you think: WTH?! lol. If it doesnt then...? Thanks for the review!

[A Marxmas Special]

hahahah! sweet

haha rock 'em sock 'em commies!

[Mortal Kombat Mishaps 3]

HAHAHA!

They just got better and better! Kahn-Frontation with the Rock was the best, I really liked the wrestling jokes you used. Fits really well as i've become addicted to the new Smackdown vs. RAW.
Anyways, continue the good work!

[HP: Sorcerers Bone]

Hahaha that was great!

I especially like the wasy his scar kept changing. It was well animated and funny aswell. Keep up the good work!

...btw i hate to be nitpicking but in the credits, just as the last one reaches the top it stops and you can still see the bottom of a letter. Man that really is such a small thing i don't know why i care about it >.<

[Le Petit Americain Ep. 2]

Nice!

It was very well animated and all the jokes about the raunchy french guy were hilarious. lol for optimum scrolling effect please tilt monitor 50 degrees away from you. I'm impressed you managed to make something last that long but keep the file size that small.
Keep up the good work

[Zelda: Majora's Mock]

good effort

I was about to give you a pretty bad review until i saw your comments on "3 different endings". So i loaded the flash up again and i was moving my mouse around the screen until the dog appeared. That third ending is what saved the movie in my opinion from being average.

Still there were many problems that i would not expect any front page flash to have.

1. The Majora's mask in the intro had little white dots around it where you had not cut it out properly. This is going to make others who watch your movie reach for the 0 button and close your movie before it actually starts.
2. BAD GRADIENTS!!!! Please, please, please use the gradient tool to soften them and make them less of a contrast. ie make it "light grey to dark grey" not "White to Black". Beleive me it will make things look better, especially the gun.
3. You can hold shift and use the brush at the same time to make lines straight, the buildings at the start look like they defy the laws of physics with the way they were built. Also you can turn smoothing down to make them less rounded at the ends.

Other than those points I will complement you on the voice acting, it was absolutly perfect. And also, although your drawing style was scrappy you can easily see that you are a good drawer. Just try to make them look a little less rough in the future.

Again a good effort, just let down by a few problems that could easily fixed.

4/5
7/10

TX2 responds:

Definately one of the best criticisms I've recieved for this movie, thank you.

Believe me, if I had known this would make front page, I would have cleaned this movie up a little more. I'll keep in mind what you said for my next work.